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2017-01-11 12:56:12
todv

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Добрый день уважаемые форумчане.
Прошу проверить резюме на английском языке на наличие ошибок.
Заранее благодарен.

Name
Location: E-mail:
Skype: Phone:
LinkedIn profile:

Objective:
To attain a position junior Java developer.

Summary:
I have 1 year of practical experience in developing Web Applications using technologies Java / J2EE, Spring and Hibernate. Experience working with Tomcat and GlassFish servers. All my projects use MySQL Database. Able to work both as a team player and on individual assignments.

Technical skills:
Languages: Java/J2EE, SQL, HTML
Frameworks: Spring, Hibernate
Databases: MySQL, H2 Database
Application Servers: Tomcat, GlassFish
Development Software: Eclipse, Git
Other Tools: JUnit, Mockito, Maven.

Projects
1. Contact list of structural subdivisions of the company.
My own project. It’s a web application for storing contacts of the structural subdivisions of the company. It implements the CRUD, using Tomcat, JSP, Spring and Hibernate frameworks and MySQL database.
Skills: Java SE, Java EE, MySQL, Spring, Hibernate, JUnit, Mockito, Maven, Tomcat, JSP, Bootstrap.

2. Web application for accounting of transport at the warehouse.
My own project. It’s a web application for accounting of transport at the warehouse. It implements the CRUD and search on various criteria in the database. Also, it implements authorization and user authentication, export to Excel and print reports.
Skills: Java SE, Java EE, MySQL, Spring (MVC, Security), Hibernate, JPA, JUnit, Mockito, Maven, Tomcat, JSP, Bootstrap.

Education:
European University
Faculty of Economics, master’s degree.

Languages:
English- intermediate
Russian- native
Ukrainian- native
2017-01-11 14:18:22
eng1791

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position -> position of (or just "junior Java developer position")
using technologies -> using
a team player -> a member of a team ("team player" is about personality description)
search on various criteria in the database -> database search
Also, it -> it also (or: as well as supporting ...)

More importantly, explain:
- The meaning of "My own project". Did you just do it for your own entertainment, without having any need for these systems or actual users? It is better if you demonstrate some need/reason for your projects.
- Try to explain the need for "1. Contact list of structural subdivisions of the company. ". When I saw this, my first thought was "why would one do this - this is MS Exchange"
2017-01-11 21:37:12
chaika

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If "Java developer" and your software or the servers is not clear (I don't know it), you should specify -- Unix, Linux or whatever.

I have
One year
experience developing
web applications
using Java/J2EE, Spring, and
Have worked with
MySQL databases.

This is a web application for storing
(don't use contractions)

This is a web application for
"accounting of transport" what is this? a logistics application?
and printing of reports.

Omit the colons in all headings.

What is CRUD?

>>Look at resume examples. your listing under Education is incorrect.

eng1791 -- MS exchange
maybe it's a unix system?

Сообщение отредактировано chaika (2017-01-11 21:38:31).

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